Post by Raggedstar on Dec 28, 2012 15:26:14 GMT -5
RAGGEDPELT
DEPUTY
[/font][li] CompanyTHE BASICSi hate where i'm at, acting crazy like that~ jealousy, darren criss
NAME,His/Her name is Raggedpelt.
GENDER,Name is a male character.
AGE,Name is 41 moons old.
POSITION,Name is a Deputy of Shadowclan.
STATS,
************STR ||APPEARANCE,
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SPE ||A completely black tom cat with shockingly green eyes line with brown flecks leading toward the pupil. He has a long muscular body as it quite a large cat, his fur is kept clean but maintains a natural shaggy appearance. He has a broad angular face with short furs leading out from his eyes to his usual long hair at the edge of his faces. His paws are large with sharpened claws, the dew claw on his right leg torn off from a previous battle. His tail is long with long hairs that run along the ground behind him as he walks, it finishes with the same black colour as his pelt.
THE TRAITSi know we've got each other, but i'm in distress~ jealousy, darren criss
PERSONALITY,Raggedstar is a contain tom with a sharp tongue. He certainly doesn't lack in wisdom - despite not being that old, he is passionate cat of Shadowclan and is truly loyal to the clan and his warriors. Although he is the typical Shadowclan cat with a vicious temper and sharp tongue, he has compassion and wouldn't see any or life suffer. He is a smart tom who is quick to come up with strategies for the warriors that will more than likely result in a win for them. In battle he is brave and fierce with little mercy, he won't hesitate to attack in battle and if necessary - to kill the cat he's fighting.
LIKES,
[/li][li] Hunting
[/li][li] Greenleaf heat
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DISLIKES,
[/li][li] Disobedience
[/li][li] Weakness
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FEARS,
[/li][li] Death
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FLAWS,
[/li][li]Not impulsive
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THE HISTORY
it's changing me, it's killing you[/font][li] MOTHER: Silverflame - A gorgeous cat with blue eyes, long fur and a grey pelt.~ jealousy, darren criss
FAMILY
[/li][li] FATHER: Brackenfur - A large tom, with dark brown fur and green eyes.
[/li][li] SIBLING(S): Amberkit - A gorgeous kit with amber eyes and a grey pelt.
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HISTORY,
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Born to Silverflame and Brackenfur in a small litter of two, himself and Amberkit. Raggedkit was lucky to have such adoring parents as a kit and although his sister was ill and needed more attention Silverflame always made sure to see to his needs at the same time. Amberkit being the runt of the litter survived few months - 2 moons to be exact. She passed away seamlessly in the night leaving Raggedkit waking beside the cold lifeless body of his sister. After Amberkits death both Silverflame and Brackenfur mourned their kit, the loss of Amberkit taking a toll on Silverflame. Before Raggedkit became an apprentice Silverflame passed away from greencough, weakened by the loss of one of her kits. Brackenfur continued to act as a father for Raggedkit, urging him to become the best he could be.
Apprentice:
Apprenticed to Owlpelt, a vicious she-cat who pushed him to his limits and beyond, rarely praising him for his successes. Raggedpaw became determined to prove he wasn't weak after coming to the conclusion through bitter grief that his sibling and mother were too weak to survive this world. Brackenfur was shocked at his sons progress and how much time he spent practicing after his training but he was proud. One day Raggedpaw ran so fast that the rough earth tore his dew claw as his paws hit the ground, soon getting infected and lying loose against his leg. During a battle against Thunderclan, Raggedpaws teared dew claw was completely removed from him unintentionally causing him to have to flee early to get treated - unable to battle.
After his recovery he realised he could no longer hold onto his prey with his two paws now that his dew claw was missing, he needed to practice new ways to hunt and of course - Owlpelt sneered at him for even bothering trying to convince him to give up, though this seemed to make him want to work harder. At the time of being made a warrior after being delayed a moon due to his injury, he was given the warrior name "Raggedpelt."
Warrior:
He was a vicious warrior in battle, but a calm and collected tom in his own camp and at gatherings. He found it easy to slip into the warriors den and befriend as many cats as he could to make his life easier, he continued to work hard on his techniques - soon demonstrating how he held onto prey with one paw when he hunted to all the apprentices to who asked. He was popular and kind, and when his father retired to the elders den he continued to visit him daily and give him freshkill when he could. But warrior life wasn't always peaceful, another battle for territory arose with Thunderclan and the life of Owlpelt was taken during the battle - leaving Thunderclan with the territory. Although Raggedpelt and Owlpelt didn't see eye to eye, he still mourned her death greatly. The life of the previous deputy was also lost, he was soon granted the new position of deputy.
Deputy:
Raggedpelts new position left him little time to think about himself, still caring for his father. He had little interest in mating - too busy with his duties with being one of the leaders in the clan.
THE OOC
this demon is killing me, oh, christ it's filling me[/blockquote][/blockquote][/blockquote][/blockquote][/blockquote]~ jealousy, darren criss
Bluemelons,You can call me Mel.
AGE,I am 14 years old.
EXPERIANCE,I have been roleplay for 4 years.
ORIGINS,I found TSN through being admin on the previous version and Shizu inviting me back.
OTHER CHARACTERS,I also play Foxpaw, Whitewind, Longtail.
Yay for Shadowclan deputy! ^^ welcome to Shadowclan!