Post by Minteh Freshness on Oct 31, 2015 14:34:24 GMT -5
I was thinking (with help from Blue =) ) that since Nightfeather turned Brackenshade down, he could become evil. He wants to get revenge on her and Rockettail. Brackenshade also wants to become leader quicker (once he actually becomes more evil than he his right now).
Alrighty, so Brackenshade wants Rockettail to do something so horrible that Nightfeather will never forgive him, but after a while he doesn't think Rockettail would anything like that. So he might find a loner she-cat that has kits (or maybe makes her pregnant). Then he will hide his scent, kill the kits and loner, somehow get Rockettail to 'accidentally' come across the scene, and then he 'happens' to come along with a patrol. They will see what 'Rockettail' did, maybe Nightfeather being in the patrol. But there happens to be an apprentice who sees what Brackenshade did but is scared and threatened by Brackenshade so he doesn't speak up.
Next, Brackenshade wants to become leader of Shadowclan because he thinks Raggedstar is weak (probably after looking the territory back to TC), so he thinks of ways to kill Ragged off without anyone knowing it was him. He figures out he can use rogues and have them try to take all of Ragged's lives at once. It doesn't go as plan and Ragged only looses one life (or However many Blue wants him to loose). The same apprentice who knew the truth about the killing (from above), will have found out about this too and finally gets the courage to speak up. Bracken is exiled from the clans and he lives with the rogues, gathering them up to take back Shadowclan and 'take what is rightfully his' by becoming leader.
Priestess Shizuka if this is or isn't okay, just tell me. We can also work on details, change things, and whatnot.
Alrighty, so Brackenshade wants Rockettail to do something so horrible that Nightfeather will never forgive him, but after a while he doesn't think Rockettail would anything like that. So he might find a loner she-cat that has kits (or maybe makes her pregnant). Then he will hide his scent, kill the kits and loner, somehow get Rockettail to 'accidentally' come across the scene, and then he 'happens' to come along with a patrol. They will see what 'Rockettail' did, maybe Nightfeather being in the patrol. But there happens to be an apprentice who sees what Brackenshade did but is scared and threatened by Brackenshade so he doesn't speak up.
Next, Brackenshade wants to become leader of Shadowclan because he thinks Raggedstar is weak (probably after looking the territory back to TC), so he thinks of ways to kill Ragged off without anyone knowing it was him. He figures out he can use rogues and have them try to take all of Ragged's lives at once. It doesn't go as plan and Ragged only looses one life (or However many Blue wants him to loose). The same apprentice who knew the truth about the killing (from above), will have found out about this too and finally gets the courage to speak up. Bracken is exiled from the clans and he lives with the rogues, gathering them up to take back Shadowclan and 'take what is rightfully his' by becoming leader.
Priestess Shizuka if this is or isn't okay, just tell me. We can also work on details, change things, and whatnot.
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